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Solero Taylor's avatar

EASTER SUNDAY

IN THE HOLY LAND

In the first version

it was described by the translator as a lamentation

but by the third or fourth it had become weeping,

less biblical, more accessible to a modern sensibility

but either way, she wasn’t happy to have lost her family

to the bombing. Husband, babies, the almost-adolescent.

An uncle who was visiting.

The means of murder gifted to her enemies by Western

governments who no longer bother to explain themselves.

What can they say?

Jesus was American, spoke English.

Occasionally, as recompense,

they drop treats by parachute, supplies

in plastic packages, originally intended for astronauts.

Imagine

what it’s like to float in space attached to nothing.

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Scuba Cat's avatar

This is an impressive piece of writing, and significant. Thank you.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

As fine as anything I've read today! Thank you

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Solero Taylor's avatar

cheers!

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Maha's avatar

Robert Bly’s poetry and essays for me have always been grist for the mill. He was a great writer and an important Presence in the world. This poem is profoundly beautiful, and deeply representative of his work and being. Thank you.

M.L. Rosenberg, writing in Tribune Books, noted in Bly’s work a blending of European and South American influences with a decidedly American sensibility: “Bly is a genius of the elevated ‘high’ style, in the European tradition of Rilke and Yeats, the lush magical realism of the South Americans like Lorca and Neruda. Yet Bly’s work is truly American, taking its atmosphere of wide empty space from the Midwest, and its unabashed straightforward emotionalism and spiritualism.

https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/robert-bly#:~:text=In%201966%2C%20Bly%20cofounded%20American,poetry%2C%20essays%2C%20and%20translations.

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Jamie Millard's avatar

Bly takes on a journey to non-duality in a resurrection of the space thats always in between.

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James J Patterson's avatar

After Bly's passing I was stunned at the lack of attention he got. No big anthology, or reprints, or literary fanfare or celebration of his work. Shame on the entire community. Jerez at Easter is proof of that slight, those omissions, I still read the man routinely! Love to all... JJP

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Maha's avatar

A literary and spiritual giant!

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Daniel Henderson's avatar

"The poet makes a meadow from each leaf.

Each curve of language turns into a lamb’s ear,

Because a genius is a child in the house of suffering.

None of us is free from a certain bend in the knee."

Amazing. No matter what trade or area we may be a master of, we all have an area of vulnerability to match. Keeps us humble in the grand scheme of things.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

'please tell me why the lamb is in love with the wolf'

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Zuu - Radio Free Amerika's avatar

How powerful is his pen.. how deep and cavernous his mind, how tender, raw and alive his soul

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Maha's avatar

Yes! to it all!

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Mark Baird.'s avatar

Scuba cat, love your handle

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Eleanor Mac Gregor's avatar

Incredible metaphors.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

'Risen'

-

dispirited and outgrown

Winter has opened out,

parasolled to Spring 

                                                                           from budded cocoons,

from blooms,

in hazy hints of dress

the confetti leaves tease valour,

of future Greatness

this feels divine, Butterfly

feels like falling

inwards

take my hand now,

cliff edge is bliss, worth the risk

we can fly when we lose our feet

anchor. stop a minute

let's savour this Risen Spring

root ourselves again,

and again

let's keep walking

     these steady steps,

          we've no business knowing      

               what out of sight Beauty

is coming next     

-

https://theseainme.substack.com/p/risen

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Robert Cunningham's avatar

This poem is good but the tone is monotonous; I think it indulges the "woe is me in a strangely beautiful world" vibe too deeply. Rouse yourself, Saturn! one might say. The skies are quite blue and blithe where I'm at. At any rate, I think "Because a child is a genius in the house of suffering" would have made for a more interesting and surprising line. I think it is far more important for a poet to be a child than a genius, too, so it doesn't break the stanza.

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Robert Cunningham's avatar

The Stoning of Saint Stephen

Army.

Be all you can be.

-- U.S. Army

how to submit: fold back your fight

as if fangs or a switchblade: hold tight to your flight

as any tar its rabbit: accept the pain

of stone on skull: fist

on lip: boot on your supine

spine. let the spirit

break

break open. then, with eyes most

worshipful

let go.

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Facundo Rompehuevos's avatar

What was he doing in Jerez?

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