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Ken Paul Rosenthal's avatar

Julia wrote more than 70 volumes of poetry in her lifetime--and this poem is my favorite. It's visual, visceral, and visionary.

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Reena Kapoor's avatar

who'll take you seriously at a party without a broken heart?

So beautiful

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Constantine Markides's avatar

It was classier back then in the 80s (heartbreak chandeliers, blood fountains), back before the department stores went online. I can only imagine what her dream would be like in the era of Cyber Monday...

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Corie Feiner's avatar

That is funny. When I look back, I remember not liking the 1980’s - partly because I was a kid and partly because I dreamed of the 1960s and partly because of the greedy culture all around me in NYC. But now, when I look at it I realize how manual it still was and how much presence I had as we all oversaw the shift to being here - online.

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Constantine Markides's avatar

I hear you. I remember that time too. A still manual era... that's a good way to put it. Shopping aside, this poem is I think even more prescient for a social media era, where the broken hearts aren't hanging from chandeliers but from lugubrious tweets and facebook posts and tiktok confessionals.

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Corie Feiner's avatar

Lugubrious is a great word.

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Constantine Markides's avatar

Right. Red fountains and red pills

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Ethan Summers's avatar

Such a provoking and beautiful poem! For some reason it made me imagine that one should enter such a shop and then he or she would have a good reason to visit another where one can buy healing recipes and remedies for aching hearts: drugs of all sorts, alcohol, meditating, solitude, dismissing love (for we need to learn how to love ourselves first, before being able to share love)… No one would judge you for your oddities or excesses when you have a wound that sore to handle …

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Corie Feiner's avatar

This line landed with a thoughtful elegance, “I dreamed nobody could live without one.”

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Peter Borkowicz's avatar

Yes, a truely beautiful piece, but I did find it hard to read as images of todays realities were knocking on my consciensness...

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Bruce Isaacson's avatar

This one is on page 270 of Julia's Selected Works with tons of other great poems. See www.Zeitgeist-Press.com.

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Lisa B. Martin    zihuawriter's avatar

Fabulous post thank you!... Powerful poem I will use in one of my upcoming...Fearless Writing workshops!!

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Julia Vinograd! A small poetry press legend!

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David's avatar

incredible poem

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Danielle Sizemore's avatar

Just wow. This one got me!

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Brilliant poem. Thank you.

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Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

Vivid and powerful

I sometimes have vivid dreams and also revisits v1, v2, v3 etc

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Norm's avatar

For the record, it isn't about shopping, it's about wounds.

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Ingrid Kincaid's avatar

Broken hearts dangled from chandeliers,

who'll take you seriously at a party without a broken heart?

Brilliant.

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Sharon Hays's avatar

This touched something deep inside. What a profound poem. Thank you for sharing.

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