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What gets me is the under current of resilience running through the poem. Even when things seem hopeless, there's this stubborn refusal to give up. It's like the speaker is saying, "Yeah, life sucks sometimes, but I'm not going down without a fight." And that line about pride being a drug? Man, that's so true. Even when everything else is falling apart, pride can be that thing that keeps you going. It's not all sunshine and rainbows; sometimes it's just one struggle after another. But even in the darkest moments, there's still that flicker of hope, that stubborn determination to keep walking down that road, no matter how endless it seems.

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I’m inclined to add: that because there are so many ways, there are so many opportunities to practice compassion, generosity, and patience, both with others and with ourselves.

There is an old Buddhist saying that “those who fall to the ground stand up by the ground.” And we can also fall to the sky and stand up by the sky, fall to the ground but stand up by the sky, and fall to the sky but stand up by the ground. Every instant offers an opportunity for exploration and growth.

Thank you for the poem this morning.

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so many ways to lose faith / I've tried them all

stood out and struck me.

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One of the things poetry does that I love is use fresh language to convey something. The incredible depth of Despair’s perspective in this is impressive!

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Apr 24Liked by Poetic Outlaws

Just bought his book - it’s my forever indulgence.

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Haunting imagery. Lerner's brutal honesty hits hard, but the fight for a sliver of hope is inspiring.

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so many ways. this got me:

so many ways to

ruin what you love the most

and drag it from the fire

and give it a new name

and sling it on your back

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Moving, haunting, brilliant…..Lerner is masterful!!

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Poetry will save the world. And we should all be adding ours to the fray, lest our souls feel unwelcome in these strange new days.

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Lerner is the best. Thank you 🙏

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Wow! 🙏

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Thanks Poetic Outlaws for publishing the Late David Lerner's memorable poem. Dave Pi

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Was he considered one of the Beat poets?

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Woah ! Deep introspection but engagingly optimistic at the end . Really good work

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