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Corie Feiner's avatar

This is like painting and a song - a dirge if you will. The repetition of vermillion at the end is bold and is like the final paint stroke of the poem.

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BB Borne's avatar

The pigment of vermilion is toxic; is the aspect of toxicity (amid beauty) intended by the poet?

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