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Canine esque's avatar

This is why I need poetry though I too often forget.

Jeanne Hamilton's avatar

Beautiful and very moving.

cal lash's avatar

I didn't know this dude.

I found his poem,

THE CURE..

I liked it.

Timely as I grieve two recent passing.

Thank you.

In Rememberance of

Gloria D Blanco and

Jon Talton.

Elizabeth Stamper's avatar

How brave we are! Perhaps true resilience happens in that final moment of giving up hope. And a spark of something thought too lost, too buried, leaps out from the innermost of the innermost. Thank you for always finding and offering the words we need to find the courage we're desperate for!

Butch Sommers's avatar

Didn't know the name of this feeling until I read this.

Maria Pinto's avatar

To forge a star out of your living breath. That is beautiful.

Ismaele Leati's avatar

You're Lazarus come from the dead

living among men with

your death still on you

Love this 🫶

bart9349's avatar

This poem is beautifully written and very powerful, but it leaves me with a kind of emptiness, almost a sense of hopelessness. There is something inside me--maybe I've read too much Bukowski lately--that just shouts: "Forget the stars and the bones and all that holy voodoo. Get yourself a lamp, pour a stiff drink, and keep moving."

Yvonne's avatar

I know the feeling all too well.

'It's then you know

that the only chance you stand

is to forge a star

out of your living breath."

Thank you for sharing!

Dealmaker's avatar

And the living breath is to invite others also out in the cold for coffee he left that out at the end

Jim Owen's avatar

I found a used copy of Albert’s book and anxiously awaiting delivery.

Alix's avatar

Such a timely piece for this life upon this world today…

Ana G's avatar

"knowing too much to ever have a friend,"

Can you ever be like others after you have experienced loneliness, do you just lie and blend in.

Great poem.

Kevin Farran's avatar

These words, these emotions are distilled from, 'dry bones and anguish.' Thank you

ann schneider's avatar

So good…thank you.