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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

This poem, Erik, is wonderful because it brings the reader into close contact with a real and authentic person - a person who has formulated a clear view of life - it's falsities, its beauties, its fleeting nature - and how best to live it. I particularly like the second stanza. I know it's good because I wish I had written it:

"To be alive is to caress destiny

with the hands of fate and

become worthy

of your vanishing breath

in the great adventure

of death."

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Stephanie CM's avatar

Wow, beautiful work 💗

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