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Taishin Michael Augustin's avatar

Oh these lines:

before you become forest again,

and water, and widening wilderness

in that hour of inconceivable terror

when you take back your name

from all things.

Just give me a little more time!

At once a reminder of how little control we have over the world and an amusing portrayal of our … dare I say ignorance?

“Just give me a little more time!”

To whom do we say these words? What sort of response are we expecting? Do we suppose that, following our plea, the Earth will add ten minutes to the countdown clock?

Or is it just an expression of our unwillingness to accept what is immediate?

I’m smiling because I do this often, too.

Thank you for the poem on this Friday. 🙏

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Dawn S. White's avatar

"in that hour of inconceivable terror

when you take back your name

from all things" --

Rilke dives into the question -- and as he stands there, alone in the privacy of his own suffering, he gifts us with truth.

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